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14x20" Arches hot press watercolour paper
Graphite, watercolour, Keith's print "Breeze" overlaid
Some 250-300 hours

Work in progress shots




First of all I offer my deepest gratitude to my husband Keith, and to my wonderful friend Sam `sphilr. In fact Sam is largely responsible for the existence of this piece. I've toiled over 5 failures, (one of which even had portions that were elaborately painted) and was on the precipice of simply giving up... Thank you both for your patient guidance.


This is one of the very rare occasions where I'm consciously conveying an idea, an emotion... something. Usually I just paint whatever scenery that blooms to mind, which is why I decided to lavish so much time and effort, for the sake of expressing something I find deeply... important.


No, this has nothing to do with suicide.


I am trying to convey the very moment when we realise the point of no return is right at our feet... that first second where we act on a decision that at the time might seem perilous, like having our hands bound and thrown off a cliff with a noose around our neck... and the unstoppable force of exhilaration that seems to bloom from the chest when the first step is taken... something wild and phenomenally beautiful bursts from within us... and in that instant, we are reborn. Perhaps not reborn as a better person... though reborn nonetheless.




Thank you very much for looking :heart:




Critiques


:iconlolitaagogo:
you solved it!!
i would have never guessed that less was more! the overlay was the answer all along. i am seriously in love with this slight burn of sunset photo color. all that previous exploration with the rich painting technique seemed to help you work, dare i say, backwards...an archeologist uncovering a lost relic...this overlay is the perfect complement to the elaborate graphite work.

the range of intensity, utilized from light to dark, makes the white space play an integral part in the weight of the figures. at once, i can relate the heaviness of my corporeal self to her plummeting. but also i am given the illusion of weightlessness through your expert use of the white space. the light of the overlay seeps through the forms and saturates the sky in that perfect way that it feels like it is also supporting her, soaring.
she could drift, carried in this moment forever, never feeling the burn of the rope or the snap of spine. youve created a true epiphany. thank you for sharing it with us :heart:
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I think anyone who looks this over, and then imagines what it would take to get from an empty canvas to this result with watercolor and graphite, will be deeply impressed by the craft. "Three hundred hours" says it all I guess, and just looking at the intricacy of the shading I can see where all that time went. I always appreciate work in which no corners were cut, nothing was left to be taken for granted, and the investment of energy was total. Detailing the toes for example, when you could have gotten away with a vague foot, but it makes a difference.

More than craft it takes a phenomenal amount of discipline to keep committed to a major project like this, and I appreciate that too. Especially when it comes in the face of several failures and new attempts. I am really glad all that has paid off in success here :)


Not centering the composition was the proper thing to do, though it is weighted to the right heavily now and white space is not personally something I am very into. A narrower canvas to eat up some of the white space on the left would help solidify it in a positive way perhaps, at lest for preview display if not printing... I like the color overlay, but it could use some blurring where there are sharp edges of yellow and pink, those edges stick out too much right now to my eye.
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:iconstigmae:
this has to be the best painting of yours as of now... it's so 3dish, colorful and inspiring. congratulations

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:iconahmed-lahsaini:
very nic Painting ^^
bravoo snow

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:iconjmonzani:
Wow o_O

One of your best pieces, I'm impressed! ^_^


PS: Hope to see you soon in the Advent Calendar, see my note;)

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:iconjeffzz111:
:omg: this beautiful... :wow: one of your most impressive piece! Together with your description, the painting becomes so meaningful... :salute: :salute: :salute:
:icondesigntu:
beatiful :aww:

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:iconvindicta38:
:wow: This is just amazing! :wow:

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:iconsnapdragon55:
The details blow my mind!! The colours are faint, but beautiful. You did such an amazing job here. :clap:
:iconorbitosu:
awesome! rlly nice <33
good work
:icondarkangel0921:
i love the details, the painting looks 3D and the colors are soft. amazing work

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