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Commentsi love the details, the painting looks 3D and the colors are soft. amazing work
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DSC-T90 10/600 second F/3.5 6 mm 80 Nov 15, 2009, 12:50:02 PM Share
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Critiques
i would have never guessed that less was more! the overlay was the answer all along. i am seriously in love with this slight burn of sunset photo color. all that previous exploration with the rich painting technique seemed to help you work, dare i say, backwards...an archeologist uncovering a lost relic...this overlay is the perfect complement to the elaborate graphite work.
the range of intensity, utilized from light to dark, makes the white space play an integral part in the weight of the figures. at once, i can relate the heaviness of my corporeal self to her plummeting. but also i am given the illusion of weightlessness through your expert use of the white space. the light of the overlay seeps through the forms and saturates the sky in that perfect way that it feels like it is also supporting her, soaring.
she could drift, carried in this moment forever, never feeling the burn of the rope or the snap of spine. youve created a true epiphany. thank you for sharing it with us
More than craft it takes a phenomenal amount of discipline to keep committed to a major project like this, and I appreciate that too. Especially when it comes in the face of several failures and new attempts. I am really glad all that has paid off in success here
Not centering the composition was the proper thing to do, though it is weighted to the right heavily now and white space is not personally something I am very into. A narrower canvas to eat up some of the white space on the left would help solidify it in a positive way perhaps, at lest for preview display if not printing... I like the color overlay, but it could use some blurring where there are sharp edges of yellow and pink, those edges stick out too much right now to my eye.
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