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11x14" cold press watercolour paper
Water-soluble crayons
Graphite, alcohol, salt, ink





Not happy with a lot of the technical aspects, especially the anatomy of her face and whatnot. However I'll treat this as a draft for something to be reworked at a later date, most likely in oils due to the subject matter, because I enjoyed the thought-process too much for me to trash the concept completely.



Thank you for looking! :iconkissmeeplz:


Critiques


:iconmrcrapinson:
I love the way you executed this painting, it's very colorful, eye catching and just pleasant to look at, but it was the expression in her face that drew me in.

The only flaw I see in this is that the anatomy is a little off, like the hands, the position of the arms, and maybe a few different parts of the face. I'm not sure what it is, but my guess is that the face is a bit too small for the head, or the jaw line is too big.

The composition itself in general is just beautiful, so it's really nothing to worry about, I just thought I'd point it out. Keep it up!
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:iconjamesodonnellart:
Re-interpreting classical themes is a well-established artistic tradition and so I will be focusing primarily on the content of this work rather than its technique. I will start out however saying that this work is executed masterfully (although the hands/arms seem somewhat inserted into the picture rather than stemming organically from the model, or perhaps not as life-like as the rest of the picture) and well-suited in its softness.

Initially, I wasn't familiar with the story of Leda and the Swan. In its most summarized form (based on my brief exploration of Wikipedia), the Greek god Zeus takes the form of a swan and impregnates the human Leda. It is also important to know that different versions of the story conflict as to whether or not this was consensual. Plus, its an animal mating with a human, so there's that. I appreciate you throwing your hat into ring as it were and tackling a loaded subject matter with a great deal of history. I also appreciate that it gave me an opportunity to learn (or re-learn, perhaps) this mythology.

This depiction is extremely innocent when compared with previous versions, many of which are quite explicit. In that way it stands out immediately. The next aspect that strikes me is the issue of timing. Is this dreamy scene before or after the intimate encounter? Her hair is nicely done up, complete with flower, however much of it is down seeming to hint at some *ahem* jostling. Is she lost in thought, lightly caressing her skin as the swan flanks her neck courting her sensuality...or is she revisiting the encounter in her head as her partner steals some affection. Her expression gives us no clues and the swan is...well...a swan. She touches the swan's beak in a delicate but platonic way. This ambiguity fascinates me, especially given the aforementioned baggage of this subject matter. Obviously you have chosen a moment that leaves the individual to create their own narrative.

All in all, some slight technical problems do not get in the way of this wonderful, dreamy scene. Thank you for becoming part of this artistic tradition. *phew!*
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:iconcsnyder:
you been busy:heart:
loving all the work from you
really lovely job her face, such a beauitufl image overall
:iconrubius:
Completely stunning in every way... I'm so happy you used salt!! :heart::heart:
You're becoming a master at backgrounds.. :love:

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:icondarkangel0921:
wow, you did a great job on her expression and her facial features. i like how she's stroking the swan's beak. the background is great, i love how it fades with her skin

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:iconkaibeaux:
Very beautiful!
I always love the colors you use in your base.
Stunning, as usual!

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"And before we die, may each and every one of us retain the ability to define the meaning of life from our own perception, in hopes that those who breathe after we pass may gain an easier understanding of reality."
Kayla.
:iconskirushiemon:
Way gorgeous Snowy. :heart:
Sorry for not commenting so much anymore. ^^; I've been busy as well. 83
Salt on paint is a great effect. <3

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:iconpandahatkatchan:
Beautiful artwork, I may say. I love how you did the background. It's so colorful, even for the girl and the swan. Beautiful, just beautiful. I am impressed at your amazing artwork. I wish to see more, if you have time. No need for rushing, of course. :D This. Beautiful picture shall be my fav'd.
:iconpb-schiller:
Where do you get the time to crank out all of these lovely pieces? D:

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:iconkinicawolf:
Beautiful! :heart: i love the swan and the feeling :)

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How did I end up here?
Discarnate, preternatural
My prayers to disappear
Absent of grace, marked as infernal
Ungranted in dead time left me disowned
To this nature, so unnatural
I remain alone
:icon1pen:
Great work with the hands and the expression on her face! :heart:

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:iconlaurart:
Lovely, I especially like the hair and eyes :rose:

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Jun 29, 2009, 3:00:28 PM

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